Poem; Known as her.

Lila4

KNOWN AS HER

on the outside she's acting super crazy,

at home she's known as  being lazy,

she knows she's always tired all the time,

she doesn't want to do much anytime,

she's recently been slowly falling short,

on school work and even some sports,

she's needing extra help on many things,

she's glad she doesn't get any beatings,

she's sad and alone fighting this battle,

she walks the halls filled with cattle,

she wishes she was noticed more by friends,

she feels there's gonna be an end,

she's scared to keep on fighting all alone,

but now whenever she goes home,

she spends much time smiling with her family,

now she's got multifamilies,

she's bringing things back up to where they were,

after her life had been a blur,

now finally her hard work has paid off,

her family says she's very tough,

she's been fighting this war for many years,

she's fought back many sets off tears,

her friends and family make her happy,

sometimes she is so called sappy,

her life has turned around for the better,

slowly now she's getting better,

having better happy thoughts all day long,

wishing she could sing a good song,

now she's finally completely happy,

she's no longer unhappy,

来自圈子: Lyria's Writing Desk

Lila4

I wrote this 2 years ago for a class, while I was struggling with my depression. anyone can get through it. I'm here if anyone needs me!

Nighty

I love the complete raw honesty this poem has to offer especially because it ties back to yourself.
You're doing great and will continue to do so. I hope to see more of your poems, I myself have written plenty due to the same reasons. I'm proud of you for making it this far.

Lila4

Nighty replied at 2018-8-5 23:42
I love the complete raw honesty this poem has to offer especially because it ties back to yourself.  ...

Thank you so much, I actually love writing. I'll post some more in the future, only thing is this was 2 years ago already haha!

Nighty

Lila4 replied at 2018-8-5 21:56
Thank you so much, I actually love writing. I'll post some more in the future, only thing is this  ...

Splendid! I'm guessing there's been much improvement since then

Pumpkin

Teenage blues. I am so glad the poem turned from sad to happy. Great poem!!!!!!!

Emily

What a lovely poem!

Lila4

Pumpkin replied at 2018-8-6 01:23
Teenage blues. I am so glad the poem turned from sad to happy. Great poem!!!!!!!

Thank you so much!

Lila4

Emily replied at 2018-8-6 02:27
What a lovely poem!

Thank you for taking the time to read it!