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[poem] Strength in Loss

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Post time 2018-6-17 13:38:46 | Show all posts |Read mode
Once upon a time,
There sat a little girl
With the voice of windchime
And eyes of mother pearl.

Her hair that sailed the winds
Like dreamy ocean waves
That shone with lustrous sheen
Which every Mortal crave.

She kept a circlet of gold
That was once under her mother's hold
Until a bittersweet goodbye
Left her with a final sigh.

But the memories remained
So dear it was to her
Despite those numbing pain
She found strength to move forward.

As the tide rolled on,
And the winds sailed on,
She made a silent promise
Into the abyss
To crusade for the better
In order to heal her.

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 Author| Post time 2018-6-17 15:09:14 | Show all posts
Nighty replied at 2018-6-17 14:04
Don't ever stop writing.

Ahhh thank youuu! And no, I never had and never will plan to stop writing, EVER <3 It's where my passion lies.
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Post time 2018-6-17 15:04:03 | Show all posts
Don't ever stop writing.
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Post time 2018-6-17 14:40:41 | Show all posts
Beautiful, moving, and well written. I love it.

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I agree with Jasper. Couldn't have said it better myself.   Post time 2018-6-17 17:58
Thank you, Jasper! <3  Post time 2018-6-17 15:07
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eleanorpixie replied at 2018-6-17 11:09
Ahhh thank youuu! And no, I never had and never will plan to stop writing, EVER

*pretend this comment is in caps lock* Good :-)))
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Post time 2018-6-17 21:03:16 | Show all posts
Hdksbfkzmnf this is great! <3

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Oh askjfhakls thank you soooo much! <3  Post time 2018-6-18 01:52
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Post time 2018-6-17 21:14:51 | Show all posts
This is beautiful. You are a talented fairy, keep writing poems!

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Thank you for the support! Keeps me going <3  Post time 2018-6-18 01:52
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Post time 2018-6-18 11:37:27 | Show all posts
Wow, this is so expressive, I love it.

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♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥  Post time 2018-6-19 07:29
Thank you so much! <3  Post time 2018-6-18 11:45
i have arisen from my five year hiatus!! jk i have gone back into the grave

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Post time 2018-6-19 21:59:55 | Show all posts
Amazingly written, Eleanor!

Ahhh thank youuu! And no, I never had and never will plan to stop writing, EVER <3 It's where my passion lies.


SAME! EXACT SAME! I am and always will be a writer.

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<3 <3  Post time 2018-6-19 22:32
"We breathe. We pulse. We regenerate. Our hearts beat. Our minds create. 37 seconds well-used is a lifetime." - Mr. Magorium's Wonder Emporium
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Post time 2018-6-20 10:07:24 | Show all posts
Ohhh myy gosh, this is so beautiful. Great, great work Ellie!

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Thank youuuu <3 You're so sweet ♥ ༼☯﹏☯༽ ♥  Post time 2018-6-20 10:16
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