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[poem] The Melody of Existance

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Post time 2018-9-22 13:10:18 | Show all posts |Read mode
Edited by ihaveausername at 2018-9-22 12:11 PM


Hey, guys! I'm back! This one isn't super fairy-related, but I thought it would fit here anyway. It originally had a different ending, but that ending didn't really fit this site's tone, so I used this one instead. I hope it still works. And as always, thanks for reading!
The Melody of Existance
Somewhere,long ago, I found
A song
Steeped long in shadow
And where I find that I’ve gone wrong
To end
in a Crescendo
And in the end before these days
I’ll stand alone as all else fades
And see alone to my own self
My Mortality
For Death is nothing to be feared
It comes only when you’re out of years
And leads you back-no need for tears-
Home
And then the song comes to a close
Another,then, begins to grow
Because of course the world’s aglow
At end times.
But only ends for you one day
For no one else, while you’re away
And know, for you, the world is saved
For it is stored
Safely.
So others keep on playing on
Their choruses, their sprightly songs
The melody, then, of it all
Is for us.
So for eternity, sing on
Because no note is written wrong
And hope is never truly gone
So never fade away.

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Post time 2018-9-22 19:29:39 | Show all posts
wow, this is amazing! I always love reading your poems.
i have arisen from my five year hiatus!! jk i have gone back into the grave

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Post time 2018-9-23 01:43:48 | Show all posts
The mid transitions are nicely restated the central theme prior to going into details
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Post time 2018-9-23 02:21:52 | Show all posts
I just remembered how great your poems are. Wonderful Poem!!!!!
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Post time 2018-10-4 15:32:39 | Show all posts
That is a very beautiful poem, and I love the ending about never giving up hope.
Always be yourself...
Unless you can be more magical!
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Post time 2018-10-4 22:02:34 | Show all posts
Oh my goodness this was beautiful! You did such an amazing job!
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