eleanorpixie 发表于 2018-6-17 13:38:46

Strength in Loss

Once upon a time,
There sat a little girl
With the voice of windchime
And eyes of mother pearl.

Her hair that sailed the winds
Like dreamy ocean waves
That shone with lustrous sheen
Which every Mortal crave.

She kept a circlet of gold
That was once under her mother's hold
Until a bittersweet goodbye
Left her with a final sigh.

But the memories remained
So dear it was to her
Despite those numbing pain
She found strength to move forward.

As the tide rolled on,
And the winds sailed on,
She made a silent promise
Into the abyss
To crusade for the better
In order to heal her. ☆

eleanorpixie 发表于 2018-6-17 15:09:14

Nighty replied at 2018-6-17 14:04
Don't ever stop writing.

Ahhh thank youuu! And no, I never had and never will plan to stop writing, EVER <3 It's where my passion lies.

Nighty 发表于 2018-6-17 15:04:03

Don't ever stop writing.

Jasper 发表于 2018-6-17 14:40:41

Beautiful, moving, and well written. I love it. ::clapping::

Nighty 发表于 2018-6-17 15:26:33

eleanorpixie replied at 2018-6-17 11:09
Ahhh thank youuu! And no, I never had and never will plan to stop writing, EVER
*pretend this comment is in caps lock* Good :-)))

anastasia-lock 发表于 2018-6-17 21:03:16

Hdksbfkzmnf this is great! <3

Akui 发表于 2018-6-17 21:14:51

This is beautiful. You are a talented fairy, keep writing poems!

amethystdayglow 发表于 2018-6-18 11:37:27

Wow, this is so expressive, I love it.

Bellflowerp 发表于 2018-6-19 21:59:55

Amazingly written, Eleanor! :)

Ahhh thank youuu! And no, I never had and never will plan to stop writing, EVER <3 It's where my passion lies.

SAME! EXACT SAME! I am and always will be a writer. :]

Cookies 发表于 2018-6-20 10:07:24

Ohhh myy gosh, this is so beautiful. Great, great work Ellie!
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