Asteria 发表于 2017-3-9 21:25:05

Asteria's Writing Desk

Edited by Asteria at 2017-3-9 19:42

Welcome!


Hey everyone! I've recently gotten back into creative writing, and I wanted to share some of my pieces with all of you! I will hopefully update this as I continue to write more. Thank you for taking the time to read! ❤️️


Short Stories

Cliff Diving

Fading


Kt~Kat 发表于 2017-3-9 21:36:26

Wonderful job on both, Asteria! I do think that even though it is a short story, you should pace things out a little more. Explain the scene and everything around it, but leave an air of curiosity to the reader. Otherwise, everything was really nicely done. I can't wait to read more of what you make! :3
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